Tuesday, February 16, 2016

Riley's Writing Narrative


Learner: Riley                Learning Coach: Mr Dyer                        Date: Week 3 - Term 1
Learning Area: Writing
Learning Observed
We have hit the ground running and are already challenging ourselves to identify what makes writing effective and how we can capture this learning in our own writing. We have identified that our best writing comes from the heart and involves sharing our thoughts, wonderings and feelings about a particular subject. We have also begun exploring ‘Show’ not ‘Tell’ to develop imagery and depth in our writing, along with writing about our sensory responses to daily events. Finally, through selecting elements of Who, What, Why, When, Where and How, we can focus on different elements of our writing in more detail.
Riley has begun to use some of the above writing techniques to make their writing #Oresome! He has the opportunity to write every day, and is involved in our author’s circles where they can seek advice and share their writing with myself and other learners. They are also invited to respond to areas for development at various stages of the writing process. It will be exciting to see how their writing develops over the course of the year starting from the example below which was one of their first pieces of independent writing.   

On a Friday, Riley contributes to our group blog. We share our thoughts, wonderings and feelings about the previous week and collaborate with the other writing groups before posting on our habitat blog. Be sure to check out these blogs when you can.
Evidence of learning
This was Riley’s first effort at writing this year. It will be exciting to see how he progresses as the year goes on.
Key Competencies/Vision Principles

Thinking - Making sense of information, experiences and ideas.
Using language, symbols, and texts - Making sense of words, numbers and images.
Managing self - knowing when to lead, when to follow and when to act independently.
Relating to others - Interacting effectively in a range of contexts.
Participating and contributing - Being actively involved in school and the community


Curious
Collaborative
Connected
Capable

Riley has begun to show his capabilities in writing even at this early stage of the year. We are connecting with events from our lives to make writing real to us. We are doing a range of independent writing and more collaborative pieces.
Next Learning Steps
Riley should continue to write from the heart and visit the Author’s circle for regular input into his writing. He is encouraged to share their writing with family members and also with other audiences at school and home.This will give him a chance to receive authentic feedback that can be used to make his next piece of writing even better.

Sunday, November 15, 2015

Narrative Assessment - 16 Oct 2015 - Reading


Learner:  Riley and Simeon               Learning Coach: Mr Hattie             Date: 16 October 2015
Learning Area: Learning Habitat 2 - Reading
Learning Observed
During the reading session today I was roaming around the habitat to see all the reading activities the learners were doing. I cam across Riley with a small group of learners around him. He was reading a book to them like he was the learning coach. He was putting on voices and all the learners were listening. This is great to see as Oral reading is good for fluency and expression. When Riley had finished Simeon was asking questions about why the tiger had done what had done and Riley was explaining it for him. This is awesome to see as questioning is a big part of comprehension. This is the sort of learning that we like to see in habitat two. It is self directed and enjoyable for them.
Evidence of learning











Riley being the learning coach while reading
Key Competencies/Vision Principles
The Key Competencies that are being used during this session is “Thinking” as Riley was thinking about what different voices are needed for each character. Simeon was thinking about the different questions that he was wanting to find out about. Collaboration is being used as the learners were collaborating during it. Capabilities are being used the learners were showing their capabilities in reading and questioning.
Next Learning Steps
Riley and Simeon’s next learning steps are:
  • to identify the text specific words.
  • answer inference questions about a text.

Tuesday, October 20, 2015

Narrative Assessment - 20 Oct 2015 - Mathematics


Learner:  Riley                   Learning Coach:  Miriam Kamsteeg            Date: 20 Oct 2015
Learning Area: Mathematics
Learning Observed
Today Riley completed a Gloss Maths assessment. He used counting on for solving the Addition and Subtraction problem. Riley again used counting on to solve the Multiplication problem. He was unable to solve the Proportions and Ratios question.
Evidence of learning
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Riley showed a great strategy for solving the different problems. I wonder if he is practising this with Mathletics?
Key Competencies/Vision Principles
Riley is developing his Capabilities in Mathematics. He is using many different problems solving strategies to figure out the questions (Thinking). Riley is able to read and process the questions (Using Language, Symbols and Texts).
Next Learning Steps
  • Explicitly teach how to use an additive strategy to solve Proportions and Ratio questions
  • Explicitly teach how to use multiplicative strategies to solve Multiplication and Division questions
  • Share Learning with home.